Really good look at what was going on for Buffy and Willow during those scenes and the counterpoint is just heart-breaking, as it was when the on-screen reveal happened.
My only concrit would be, that even though the last line is awesome and true, it also breaks the POV you've established throughout. I know. Picky picky picky.
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Date: 2011-03-04 07:32 pm (UTC)My only concrit would be, that even though the last line is awesome and true, it also breaks the POV you've established throughout. I know. Picky picky picky.